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The roses thorns have ripped the skin
Unsettled darkness closes in
No shadows fall apon the ground
There is no light to go around

The mask was ripped from dying face
No dead skin now to cover base
No sun to light the darkened day
Nore even stars to light the way

I've kept the tears beneath the skin
And now know no one should get in
I'll sit and watch the rain fall down
And sleep and dream of how to drown

My body has a thousand scars
I lay here dead on shattered glass.
©2005-2009 ~no1important
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Sometimes I wonder what the point is.

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:iconloveshaq:
wow this is awesomely powerful stuff man! :handshake: nice one.

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Encourage Advanced Critique.

~BadReligion-fans

:earth: one love

feel the wave.

No to the NWO!
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Upon the shattered glass you lay
They come to take you away,
No dream, No sleep no living now
Darkness surrounds you all.
What once where tears
Have failed away,
No eyes for them to fall.




you write so wonderfully. we are like soulmates acrross the ways.

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:iconno1important:
lol. thanks man.

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A Mask Made of Flesh and Thorns

:blackrose: The Fallen :blackrose:
:iconangels-and-insects:
fucking superb. I love this one, apart from a fucking strong message, imagery blah blah...not going to get too scientific. When reading it the words just roll so smoothly. Seriously dude, this is gold.

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YaY!
:iconloveshaq:
no probs

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Encourage Advanced Critique.

~BadReligion-fans

:earth: one love

feel the wave.

No to the NWO!
[link]

end of transmission...
:iconno1important:
Nah man, I know who my soulmate is.... we don't talk anymore. Believe me... the whole thing is overrated.

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A Mask Made of Flesh and Thorns

:blackrose: The Fallen :blackrose:
:iconthingswentbackwards:
Ok sorry :(

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:iconno1important:
Sorry. I'm kinda sensitive about the whole thing right now. (ironically enough, I spoke to him today) Thanks for the thought though.

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A Mask Made of Flesh and Thorns

:blackrose: The Fallen :blackrose:
:iconthingswentbackwards:
Hey, just trying to reach out to someone anyone who has/is sharing my pain...thats all .I hurt and want to die also..

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